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Saturday, June 11, 2011
MY COUSIN AND I
we went to brisbane and we went to the science center it was busy there. some of the parents and children went to watch the show. Me and Jack went and played at the waterfall while caitlin and emily were playing with statues. we soon got in trouble then we and sat down on a park bench. while we were waiting i went to the whale mall, it has two big whale and one baby whale, there were sound effects of whales making a grown kind of noise. before we went to the science center we went to the shops we got some smiggle stuff. After we went to the science center we went to the markets we all got a donut stick also known as churros we ate them beside a pool that was damaged by the floods. Then jaydah went to amart all sports to look for snickers for school. now we are at home writing this blog post about our day in the busy city.!!! thanks for reading :)
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