Today my sister and I went to a birthday party. Her name was Kayla she is 4. There was a jumping castle and a tranpoline. I went on the jumping castle a few times. And the tranpoline a few times too. They were both really good things I want to go on it again. There was lollies and faiybread. There was two cakes ice-crem cake and normal cake. I got my face painted but Emily didn't. Even know I wasn't invited to Kayla's party I still got a party bag. IT WAS A GREAT TIME.
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Saturday, May 7, 2011
KAYLA'S BIRTHDAY PARTY
Today my sister and I went to a birthday party. Her name was Kayla she is 4. There was a jumping castle and a tranpoline. I went on the jumping castle a few times. And the tranpoline a few times too. They were both really good things I want to go on it again. There was lollies and faiybread. There was two cakes ice-crem cake and normal cake. I got my face painted but Emily didn't. Even know I wasn't invited to Kayla's party I still got a party bag. IT WAS A GREAT TIME.
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Hi Caitlin,
ReplyDeleteThat is a good post.
I love lollies and cake too.
Where did you have the Partie?