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Tuesday, March 30, 2010

My adveches to the dam

Hi my name is Jack.I,m going to tall you about when I went to woven Howe dame.When I went to woven Howe dame.I Court lots of fish when I was there.My Dad Cort the most fish in the family.I Cort the seceded most fish in the family.My brother Court the last most in the family.My Mum Court the third most in the family.My Dad Court 15 fish.I Court 13 fish.My Mum Court 10 fish. My brother Court 8 fish.the end

2 comments:

  1. Hi Jack. I like your post.I did not now that you cod cach more fish then your Dad.from Hemant.

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